Write about our environment

[babykute_tócdài]

You should write about the real situation,the pollution and the causes of pollution and what we should do to protect our environment .Use your own ideas,knowledge and experience to support your arguments

 

[Lonely Meteor]

You should write about the real situation,the pollution and the causes of pollution and what we should do to protect our environment .Use your own ideas,knowledge and experience to support your arguments

The environment is verything around us,both natural and man-made.But there is an important problem with our environment that is the pollution of the environment.
There are a lot of causes of pollution.Firstly,people burn fule,gabage this makes the air is becoming polluted.Secondly.they throw away garbage everywhere such asn the street,at school and public places….Thirdly,the exhaust fume from the cars,motorbikealso makes the environment is polluted.
Therefore,immediately we need to protect our environment.There are a lot of different ways to protect the environment.For example,we can use banana leaves to wrap food instead of plastic bags,go to school or go to work by bike,put some garbage bins around the schoolyard,…And we can also hold a meeting to tell about the protection of the environment.
Finally,I hope that everybody will protect the environment and makes our environement is becoming more beautiful

P/s:Văn vẻ còn kém lắm,có gì ko đúng thì tự sửa nhá em))

 

[Butchi]

The environment is verythings around us,both natural and man-made.But there is an important problem with our environment that is the pollution of the environment.
There are a lot of causes of pollution.Firstly,people burn fule,gabage this makes the air is becoming polluted.Secondly.they throw away garbage everywhere such asn the street,at school and public places….Thirdly,the exhaust fume from the cars,motorbike also makes the environment is polluted.
Therefore,immediately we need to protect our environment.There are a lot of different ways to protect the environment.For example,we can use banana leaves to wrap food instead of plastic bags,go to school or go to work by bike,put some garbage bins around the schoolyard,…And we can also hold a meeting to tell about the protection of the environment.
Finally,I hope that everybody will protect the environment and makes our environemtn is becoming more beautiful

P/s:Văn vẻ còn kém lắm,có gì ko đúng thì tự sửa nhá em))

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