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[gaodenvang]

In recent years Valentino has become one of europe's leading brands of chocolate. It is now ready to become a successful international business. The board of Directors had agreed of the following investment plan.

Fristly, we need to buy new machinery. This should help us to end the delays caused by the old machines breaking down. The costs of buy new machinery is about 200.000 Usd

Secondly, we should invest in more research and development. We won’t stay ahead of the competition with the traditional products. This solution not only makes more choice for the customers, but also expands a new market. The costs is about 200.000 USD

Finally, we need to finance a market survey and research trips to the Us. It will help us to assess the market potential for valentino products. And we can contact agents to sign contracts sell Valentino products. It costs about 100.000 USD.

We looking forward to hearing from you.

 

[Butchi]

In recent years Valentino has become one of Europe's leading brands of chocolate. It is now ready to become a successful international business. The board of Directors had agreed of the following investment plan.

Fristly, we need to buy new machinery. This should help us to end the delays caused by the old machines breaking down. The costs of buying new machinery is about 200.000 Usd

Secondly, we should invest in more research and development. We won’t stay ahead of the competition with the traditional products. This solution not only makes more choice for the customers, but also expands a new market. The costs is about 200.000 USD

Finally, we need to finance a market survey and research trips to the Us. It will help us to assess the potential market for valentino products. And we can contact agents to sign contracts to sell Valentino products. It costs about 100.000 USD.