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[bebapkute]

đề: write a paragraph about a relationship in your life that changed over time.
One of the closest relationships is relationship between mother and daughter. When I was a baby, I thought my mom had to do everything for me because it’s her duty. I usually asked her buy new clother and new shoes. When I was 10, I liked to hang out with my friend more than stayed at home with my mom. If she refused to let me leave the home, I’ll yell at her and sometime I said:” I hate you” to her. When I was 18, I felt embrassed when someone asked me about her because she’s just a worker. But till a day when my mom got sick, she had go to hospital, I had to do everything by myself. I felt lonely and so scare. I can’t did anything by myself. I realized how wrong I was. After she went home, I take care her. I liked to stayed at home and helped her do task. I told her:” I love you” everyday. I’m lucky because I’m her daughter.

 

[Butchi]

One of the closest relationships is the one between mother and daughter. When I was a baby, I thought my mom had to do everything for me because it’s her duty. I usually asked her to buy new clothes and new shoes. When I was 10, I liked to hang out with my friends more than staying at home with my mom. If she refused to let me leave the home, I would yell at her and sometime I said:” I hate you” to her. When I was 18, I felt embrassed when someone asked me about her because she’s just a worker. But till a day when my mom got sick, she had go to hospital, I had to do everything by myself. I felt lonely and so scared. I couldn't do anything by myself. I realized how wrong I was. After she went home, I took care of her. I liked to stayed at home and helped her do the housework. I told her:” I love you” everyday. I’m lucky because I’m her daughter.