Mọi người giúp mình viết một bức thư ngắn với những từ gợi ý cho sẵn với.

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Bài này mình có ý cho sẵn hết rồi, chỉ cần thêm chủ ngữ, vị ngữ vào cho thành câu hoàn chỉnh thôi nhưng mình không biết cho sao cho đúng ngữ pháp mọi người giúp mình với. Chỉ cần viết thành câu hoàn chỉnh của từng gợi ý đưa vào bài để thành bức thư thôi không cần viết gì bên ngoài hết. Thanks mọi người
Complete the email from a recruitment offcier of the department to job applicants. Wrtie about three main ob responsibilities and outline three essential qualifications a job applicant must have.

-Position : Brand Manager for the subsidiary in VIetNAm

-Job duties: Develop company's brand budget
Analyze customer trends
Ensure brand profitability

- Essential abilities and requirements : Strong strategic thinking
Ability to work under pressure
MBa degree and 4 years of field experience.
Mọi người giúp mình viết bức thư với những từ gợi ý này với.

Dear Sir
An American IT company, supplies Internet requirement ( Name the vacant position)



(Describe three main responsibilities)



(Add three essential abilities and requirements)



We hope you will be interested in the vacancy, and look forward to hearing from you.

 

[Butchi]

Bạn cứ viết đi mình sẽ sửa cho.

 

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Dear prospective applicants.
We are looking for a candidate for the position of brand manager for the subsidiary in VietNam.
The Brand Manager will have three main job responsibilities:
- The brand manager will be responsible for the development of a brand budget to cover all the anticipated expenses as well as projected revenues for the brand.
- The Brand Manager is responsible for analyzing customer trends to recommend appropriate action.
- The Brand Manager is responsible for maintaining the profitability of the brand.
So candidates need some essential abilities and requirements:
- Ideal candidates have to possess a strong strategic thinking.
- Candidates should demonstrate abilities to work well under pressure.
- Candidates should have an MBA degree and must have 4 years of field experience. ( Yêu cầu nên dùng should hay dùng have to, need thì đúng hơn vậy?)
We hope you will be interested in the vacancy, and look forward to hearing from you.Bạn chỉnh sửa giúp mình với. Bạn xem giúp mình cách dùng ngữ pháp có đúng không với nha. Thanks bạn.

 

[Butchi]

Dear prospective applicants.

We are looking for a candidate for the position of brand manager for the subsidiary in VietNam.

To take the job well, the Brand Manager need to have three main job responsibilities. First of all, he or she should be responsible for the development of a brand budget to cover all the anticipated expenses as well as projected revenues for the brand. Second, the he or she is responsible for analyzing customer trends to recommend appropriate action. Last but not least, the Brand Manager is responsible for maintaining the profitability of the brand.

So candidates need some essential abilities and requirements. In the first place, ideal candidates have to possess a strong strategic thinking. Besides, candidates should demonstrate abilities to work well under pressure. One more thing to be counted is that candidates should have an MBA degree and must have 4 years of field experience.

We hope you will be interested in the vacancy, and look forward to hearing from you.