chú ý: màu xanh: sai
màu đỏ: thiếu
bài 1:
Bài viết của soctuyet
My house has 3 floor and terrace . It has
green which my father likes . In the first
floor ,when you come in , you can see the
living room at first . And then , you see my
kitchen with tea colour . A kind of the
colour is very warm , so it's suitable for a
kitchen. Behind the kichen , there is a little
yard where my mother is growing some
plants as : onion , saffron , ginger , chilly ,
ect... She loves growing so much , so she
cultivates them very hard as like her
children . Besides , the kitchen is the
cleanest room in my house becaus my
mother cleans it everyday .
In the second floor , there is my room and
my mother's room . Of course , my mother's
room is very cleanly . I only cleans it two
time on a month . My room is grass_green ,
has a lot of the plants . My desk is in nearly
the window . But before you com in my
room , you must to go past the relaxing
room where my family watch tv at every
night .
After that the third floor has my brother's
room and guest's room . My brother's room
is the dirtiest room . He is a lazy boy . He
won't clean his room unless parent shout
him .
And finally , the terrace is wonderful place
where I usually contemplate the stars and
breathe the pure air whenever I sad
bài sửa
My house has 3 floors and a terrace . It has
green which my father likes . In On the first
floor ,when you come in , you can see the
living room at first . And then , you see my
kitchen with tea colour . A kind of the
colour is very warm a very warm colour,
so it's suitable for a kitchen. Behind the
kitchen , there is a little yard where my
mother is growing grows some plants such
as : onion , saffron , ginger , chilly , ect...(
such as : như là ) She loves growing
gardening so much , so she cultivates them
very hard as like as if they were her
children ( as if : y như thể ). Besides , the
kitchen is the cleanest room in my house
because my mother cleans it everyday .
In On the second floor , there is aremy
room and my mother's room . Of course ,
my mother's room is very cleanly(sau to be
dùng tính từ ) . I only cleans it two time on
twice a month . My room is grass_green ,
has with a lot of the plants ( sau a lot of
không bao giờ có the nhé ). My desk is in
nearly the window . But before you com in
my room , you must to go past the relaxing
room where my family watch tv at every
night .( sau must động từ nguyên mẫu không
to )
After that the third floor hasare my brother's
room and guest's room . My brother's room
is the dirtiest room . He is a lazy boy . He
won't never cleans his room unless my
parents shout at him .
And finally , the terrace is wonderful place
where I usually contemplate the stars and
breathe the pure air whenever I am sad . (
sad là tính từ phải đi với to be )
màu đỏ: thiếu
bài 1:
Bài viết của soctuyet
My house has 3 floor and terrace . It has
green which my father likes . In the first
floor ,when you come in , you can see the
living room at first . And then , you see my
kitchen with tea colour . A kind of the
colour is very warm , so it's suitable for a
kitchen. Behind the kichen , there is a little
yard where my mother is growing some
plants as : onion , saffron , ginger , chilly ,
ect... She loves growing so much , so she
cultivates them very hard as like her
children . Besides , the kitchen is the
cleanest room in my house becaus my
mother cleans it everyday .
In the second floor , there is my room and
my mother's room . Of course , my mother's
room is very cleanly . I only cleans it two
time on a month . My room is grass_green ,
has a lot of the plants . My desk is in nearly
the window . But before you com in my
room , you must to go past the relaxing
room where my family watch tv at every
night .
After that the third floor has my brother's
room and guest's room . My brother's room
is the dirtiest room . He is a lazy boy . He
won't clean his room unless parent shout
him .
And finally , the terrace is wonderful place
where I usually contemplate the stars and
breathe the pure air whenever I sad
bài sửa
My house has 3 floors and a terrace . It has
green which my father likes . In On the first
floor ,when you come in , you can see the
living room at first . And then , you see my
kitchen with tea colour . A kind of the
colour is very warm a very warm colour,
so it's suitable for a kitchen. Behind the
kitchen , there is a little yard where my
mother is growing grows some plants such
as : onion , saffron , ginger , chilly , ect...(
such as : như là ) She loves growing
gardening so much , so she cultivates them
very hard as like as if they were her
children ( as if : y như thể ). Besides , the
kitchen is the cleanest room in my house
because my mother cleans it everyday .
In On the second floor , there is aremy
room and my mother's room . Of course ,
my mother's room is very cleanly(sau to be
dùng tính từ ) . I only cleans it two time on
twice a month . My room is grass_green ,
has with a lot of the plants ( sau a lot of
không bao giờ có the nhé ). My desk is in
nearly the window . But before you com in
my room , you must to go past the relaxing
room where my family watch tv at every
night .( sau must động từ nguyên mẫu không
to )
After that the third floor hasare my brother's
room and guest's room . My brother's room
is the dirtiest room . He is a lazy boy . He
won't never cleans his room unless my
parents shout at him .
And finally , the terrace is wonderful place
where I usually contemplate the stars and
breathe the pure air whenever I am sad . (
sad là tính từ phải đi với to be )
