Đề bài : Write me 01

[Pe_cun]

Hướng dẫn: Các em sẽ đọc một bức thư từ Alice, một bạn gái đến từ Anh, các em sẽ trả lời thư của Alice bằng cách gõ vào mục GỞI TRẢ LỜI và gửi tới vnkienthuc.com để chấm điểm và nhận xét.

Name: Alice ( Tên : Alice )
Nationality: English ( Quốc tịch : Anh )
Age:

Dear all!
My name is Alice. I’m from England. I am 10 years old. My hobbies are dancing, singing and learning English. I also like to make friends with all kids around the world.
There are 5 members in my family, my parents, my brother, I, and Tabby, my lovely cat.
Now, my school year is over. I’m going to have holiday with my family in Paris, France. We usually spend summer time traveling together. Each summer is different, and we have a lot of fun. In this summer, we are going to visit Eiffel Tower, Disney Land, and Louvre Museum. I love my family so much. And, I love to know about you, your family and your summer plan, too. Please, write me when you have time.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Love,
Alice
Bài dịch :
Luân Đôn , Anh



Kính gửi tất cả!


Tên tôi là Alice. Tôi đến từ nước Anh. Tôi 10 tuổi. Sở thích của tôi đang nhảy múa, ca hát và học tiếng Anh. Tôi cũng muốn làm bạn với tất cả trẻ em trên thế giới.


Có 5 thành viên trong gia đình tôi, bố mẹ tôi, anh tôi, tôi, và Tabby, mèo đáng yêu của tôi.


Bây giờ, năm học của tôi là hơn. Tôi sẽ có kỳ nghỉ với gia đình của tôi ở Paris, Pháp. Chúng tôi thường dành thời gian đi du lịch mùa hè với nhau. Mỗi mùa hè là khác nhau, và chúng tôi có rất nhiều niềm vui. Trong mùa hè này, chúng tôi sẽ đến thăm tháp Eiffel, Disney Land và Bảo tàng Louvre. Tôi yêu gia đình tôi rất nhiều. Và, tôi yêu biết về bạn, gia đình và kế hoạch mùa hè của bạn, quá. Xin vui lòng, viết cho tôi khi bạn có thời gian.


Hy vọng được nghe từ bạn sớm.


Thân mến ,


Alice.
Ghi chú ,:Sau 1 tuần 3 ngày ( khi hết hạn gửi bài )các bạn sẽ đọc một bức thư từ Kichi, một bạn gái đến từ Việt Nam, xem bạn ấy đã trả lời thư của bạn Alice như thế nào nhé!


THỜI HẠN NỘP BÀI :CÒN 2 NGÀY

 

[Body1]

Bài gửi :
Ninh Binh, Viet Nam
July 6, 2012

Dear Alice!
My name is Hung. I'm from Viet Nam. I am 10 years old. My hobbies are swimming, playing chess, learning Maths and English. I am very happy to make friend with you and I also like to make friends with all kids around the world.
There are 7 members in my family: my grandfather, my grandmother, my father, my mother, my older sister, I and two lovely dogs: Max and Jon.
My school year is over, too. I'm having a funny holiday with my family in Ha Long Bay. We visited to many beautiful places. Ha Long Bay is the most beautiful place in my country. I will take you to visit it when you come my country.
Alice! Would you like to come and visit me next summer?
Please, write me when you receive my letter.

Hope to hear from you soon.

BEST WISHES

Love,
Hung

 

[Pe_cun]

@Body1 :
Điểm: 10/10


Ninh Binh, Viet Nam
July 6, 2012

Dear Alice!
My name is Hung. I'm from Viet Nam. I am 10 years old. My hobbies are swimming, playing chess, learning Maths and English. I am very happy to make friend (friends)with you and I also like to make friends with all kids around the world.
There are 7 members in my family: my grandfather, my grandmother, my father, my mother, my older sister, I and two lovely dogs: Max and Jon.
My school year is over, too. I'm having a funny holiday with my family in Ha Long Bay. We visited to many beautiful places. Ha Long Bay is the most beautiful place in my country. I will take you to visit it when you come my country.
Alice! Would you like to come and visit me next summer?
Please, write me when you receive my letter.

Hope to hear from you soon.

BEST WISHES

Love,
Hung
Bài viết của em có nội dung rất thú vị, sử dụng các cấu trúc rất tốt. Em cố gắng cẩn thận hơn khi viết bài để bài viết sau hoàn chỉnh hơn nữa nhé
Chúc em học thật tốt!
LƯU Ý : Ngữ pháp sai được sử dụng bằng chữ màu xanh dương và swuar bằng chữ màu đỏ !!

 

[munchan]

Bài gửi :
Dear Alice!
My name is Chi. I'm from Vietnam. I'm nine years old. My interests are reading English books, singing and playing sports. I hope that I can make friends with you and all children in the world.
My family has five members: my father, my mother, two elder sisters and I.
Last month, we went to England, your homeland.We visited a lot of interesting places such as: Big Ben Clock, Hype Park, Thames River, Wembley Stadium, London Bridge,... Especially, We went to Liverpool City, the wonderful city.
People are very frendly and hospitable. I love your country and my family so much.
That was my holiday. Write me and tell your next plan.
Best wishes,
Chi

 

[Pe_cun]

@munchan
Điểm : 10/10
Dear Alice!

My name is Chi. I'm from Vietnam. I'm nine years old. My interests are reading English books, singing and playing sports. I hope that I can make friends with you and all children in the world.
My family has five members: my father, my mother, two elder sisters and I.
Last month, we went to England, your homeland.We visited a lot of interesting places such as: Big Ben Clock, Hype Park, Thames River, Wembley Stadium, London Bridge,... Especially, We went to Liverpool City, the wonderful city.
People are very frendly (friendly) and hospitable. I love your country and my family so much.
That was my holiday. Write me and tell your next plan.
Best wishes,
Chi
Bài viết của Chi rất tốt, bạn dùng cấu trúc rất chính xác. Tuy nhiên, Chi chú ý là đầu thư thì mình nên có địa chỉ và ngày tháng mình viết thư ở góc trên cùng bên phải của thư nhé.
Chúc bạn học tốt!

 

[monchan]

Bài gửi :
Hanoi, Vietnam
July 6, 2012
Dear Alice,

Nice to meet you Alice!

My name is Phuong. I'm from Vietnam. I'm 12 years old. My hobbies are drawing, learning English and play games. My favorite sport is badminton and I also like to play with Lucky, my little hamster.

My family has four people, my parents, my younger brother and I. We're very happy. I love my family very much.

Now, I'm having an interesting vacation in Nha Trang beach. We're having a great time together. We're going to visit Hon Tre, Hon Yen island... It's really fun.
That is my summer vacation. And write me soon as you can.

Love,

Phuong

 

[Pe_cun]

@monchan:



Điểm: 10/10


Hanoi, Vietnam
July 6, 2012
Dear Alice,

Nice to meet you Alice!

My name is Phuong. I'm from Vietnam. I'm 12 years old. My hobbies are drawing, learning English and play (playing) games. My favorite sport is badminton and I also like to play with Lucky, my little hamster.

My family has four people, my parents, my younger brother and I. We're very happy. I love my family very much.

Now, I'm having an interesting vacation in Nha Trang beach. We're having a great time together. We're going to visit Hon Tre, Hon Yen island... It's really fun.
That is my summer vacation. And write me soon as (as soon as) you can.

Love,

Phuong


Bài viết của Phương rất thú vị, các cấu trúc được sử dụng linh hoạt. Tuy nhiên, bạn cố gắng cẩn thân hơn khi viết bài nhé
Chúc bạn học thật tốt!

 

[Ngân Quỳnh]

Bài Gửi :
Ho Chi Minh City, Viet Nam
July 7th, 2012
Hi Alice,
I'm Ngan Quynh. I come from Viet Nam. I'm 10 years old. I enjoy playing games, chatting online, listening to music, watching movies and studying English.
There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my sister and me.
Now, I'm on my summer vacation. We are going to Malaysia and France. We'll visit Twin Tower, Eiffel Tower and Notre Dame Cathedral.
Hope to see you in France
Love,
Ngan Quynh

 

[Ngân Quỳnh]

Hung Yen, Vietnam

July 8, 2012
Dear Alice,

My name is Ngan Quynh. I am from Vietnam. I am Vietnamese. I am ten years old too. I like learning English, drawing and reading.
There are 5 people in my family, my grandmother, my parents, my elder brother and me.
My parents are teachers. They teach in Hung Yen. My brother and I are students. I am going to be in grade 4 next school year.
Now, Iam staying at home. My family is going to visit Halong Bay next week. Do you know Halong Bay? It has beautiful beaches and great islands. Have you been there?
Please, write me when you have time.
Hope to hear from you soon.

Love,

Ngan Quynh

 

[Pe_cun]

Chấm điểm : ​10/10

Ho Chi Minh City, Viet Nam

July 7th, 2012

Hi Alice,

I'm Ngan Quynh. I come from Viet Nam. I'm 10 years old. I enjoy playing games, chatting online, listening to music, watching movies and studying English.

There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my sister and me.

Now, I'm on my summer vacation. We are going to Malaysia and France. We'll visit Twin Tower, Eiffel Tower and Notre Dame Cathedral.

Hope to see you in France

Love

Ngan Quynh

iBÀi vết của bạn khá ngắn gọn, nhưng qua đó bạn đã thể hiện được việc sử dụng cấu trúc tốt cùng vốn từ vựng khá. Tuy nhiên, nếu có thể bạn hãy kể nhiều thêm về bản thân cũng như gia đình của mình cho bạn Alice nghe nhé
Chúc bạn học tốt

 

[Pe_cun]

Chấm điểm :​10/10
@Ngân Quỳnh ( bài 2 ) :

July 8, 2012

Dear Alice,


My name is Ngan Quynh. I am from Vietnam. I am Vietnamese. I am ten years old too. I like learning English, drawing and reading.

There are 5 people in my family, my grandmother, my parents, my elder brother and me.


My parents are teachers. They teach in Hung Yen. My brother and I are students. I am going to be in grade 4 next school year.

Now, Iam staying at home. My family is going to visit Halong Bay next week. Do you know Halong Bay? It has beautiful beaches and great islands. Have you been there?

Please, write me when you have time.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Love,

Ngan Quynh .

• Bài viết của bạn rất hay, ngôn từ phong phú, sử dụng đúng cấu trúc.Tiếp tục phát huy nhé
  Chúc bạn học tốt!
  

 

[Pe_cun]

@ Ngân Quỳnh (bài 2 )
Điểm: 10/10


Hung Yen, Vietnam

July 8, 2012
Dear Alice,

My name is Ngan Quynh. I am from Vietnam. I am Vietnamese. I am ten years old too. I like learning English, drawing and reading.
There are 5 people in my family, my grandmother, my parents, my elder brother and me.
My parents are teachers. They teach in Hung Yen. My brother and I are students. I am going to be in grade 4 next school year.
Now, Iam staying at home. My family is going to visit Halong Bay next week. Do you know Halong Bay? It has beautiful beaches and great islands. Have you been there?
Please, write me when you have time.
Hope to hear from you soon.

Love,

Ngan Quynh.
Bài viết của bạn rất hay, ngôn từ phong phú, sử dụng đúng cấu trúc.Tiếp tục phát huy nhé
Chúc bạn học tốt!